xkatyxconspiracy
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| Posted: 14 Nov 2010 07:44 AM Subject: Puppet Master. |
I wrote this in four minutes, so don't flame it too harshly. :c
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You played the part well;
With your gorgeous eyes and gentle disposition, I thought you to be a kind master.
You immediately had me under your spell; I was hypnotized well past the point of foolishness.
But unbeknown to me, you were the silent type; the silent type of killer.
You killed with your smile, with your charming facade.
You maintained your spell for days, weeks, months.
You made me fall in love with a lie.
I lived for you, I breathed for you.
You had so much power over me.
I would have done anything for you.
I would have lied for you, I would have died for you.
I would have done anything for you,
If you had simply asked me to.
You had the utmost control over me.
Your words, your actions, they controlled my moods.
They controlled my life.
With virtually no effort on your part, you could make me dance to your lovely, lethal melody.
But guess what?
I finally cut the strings.
Now all you hold in your hand is a simple piece of wood.
I am no longer your puppet,
And you are no longer my master. |
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Would it be okay if I took your breath a w a y ? ♥ |
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| Posted: 14 Nov 2010 04:15 PM Subject: RE: Puppet Master. |
I totally agree with Ashley.
You are a brilliant writer.
I wouldn't be able to write that good in a bajillion years<3
Your English teacher must be glad to have you in their class.
Keep it up, hon :D |
Connor;
“More than anything, all I have ever wanted is to be close to someone.
More than anything, all I have ever wanted is to feel as if i wasn't alone.” |
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-thoughtlessdork
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| Posted: 15 Nov 2010 01:44 AM Subject: RE: Puppet Master. |
I triple agree with Ashley and Connor
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4 mins of unique and amazing writing straight from the heart is always the
best you certainly have a gift Katy and you use it well.
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keena
Gemini ❤ 12 02 09
Occupation; Dorky punkie Junkie Chick
I'm searching for my piece of light, it rains, it pours
I'll find my way but please don't leave me here again All alone.
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