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-thoughtlessdork


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Posted: 04 Jan 2010 11:54 PM       Subject: The Words that won't Come out
Every time i wanna say what's on my Mind
My Voice Flees like Falling Rain Only Backwards
I tell myself i'm not Afraid, yet my Voice keeps Hiding away

i Have no Clue what do
after all what do i have to lose?
the Answer is You
sometimes it feels like Painted
whites are the only way around
i don't mean any harm or Confusion

it's just that words can feel like Action
Action are words
i don't wanna say the
Wrong Action and end up
regretting it
guess i'm still not use to this
being opened and held

when in the past my heart felt like a Jail
my mind swimming in a liquid hell
i couldn't tell what good felt like bad was good
good wasn't good.

the words that won't come out are tears
and if theres not tears there my silence covered
in a blanket of fear
all i want is for you to be here my mouth won't budge
but my heart is screaming your name
even though Mums the Word.

i'll never feel the Words that won't Come out
like this Again.


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keena
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Posted: 05 Jan 2010 04:46 PM         Subject: RE: The Words that won't Come out
That was really good Keena.
I loved it<3
Especially this part...

"i Have no Clue what do
after all what do i have to lose?
the Answer is You"

<3
"When the sky turns gray
and everything is screaming
I will reach inside
just to find my heart is beating"
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Posted: 05 Jan 2010 04:50 PM         Subject: RE: The Words that won't Come out
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I loved it. <33

And Keena, I think I've already said this, but I don't know, the way you type just amuses the crap out of me. In a good way. Like, you randomly capitalize random words... randomly. Haha. I love it.

Buutttt, seriously, this is sooo good. <3
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Posted: 05 Jan 2010 05:15 PM         Subject: RE: The Words that won't Come out
Oooomygod, I've noticed she does that to, and I was starting to wonder why!
"When the sky turns gray
and everything is screaming
I will reach inside
just to find my heart is beating"
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Posted: 05 Jan 2010 05:49 PM         Subject: RE: The Words that won't Come out
Thank You Morgan and Dani!
haha i remember u telling me that last year xD
glad you liked it i randomly wrote it outta the blue around
1am on here lol
haha Yay for my Amusing typing
thankies :D

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keena
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Posted: 06 Jan 2010 03:43 PM         Subject: RE: The Words that won't Come out
Awh. That's really good Keena.
Nice work dood, I loved it.

I'm in love with you, and I'm not in the business of denying myself the simple pleasure of saying true things.
I'm in love with you, and I know that love is just a shout into the void, and that oblivion is inevitable, and that
we're all doomed and that there will come a day when all our labor has been returned to dust, and I know the sun
will swallow the only earth we'll ever have, and I am in love with you.
John Green, The Fault in Our Stars.

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Posted: 06 Jan 2010 04:23 PM         Subject: RE: The Words that won't Come out
Loved it! <3
Kinda reminds me of someone ;)
New account.
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Posted: 11 Jan 2010 03:01 PM         Subject: RE: The Words that won't Come out
Thank you Kristina and Monty :)

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