Topic: Another apology..this time, someone actually has to read it.
Forum Index : Creative Outlet : Writer's Block : Another apology..this time, someone actually has to read it.  
fallingstupidforyoux


Posts: 7056
Bzoink Rockstar
Profile | Journal
Posted: 03 Nov 2009 02:37 PM       Subject: Another apology..this time, someone actually has to read it.
Mood: annoyed | Status: fallingstupidforyoux Monty isn't very happy right now. lol :p Thursday
This is to the someone, who I wrote Bruised about...I'm sorry for doing things I shouldn't have done in the first place. But hey, I'm still young, and we learn from mistakes, right?

"Right From The Start"
I understand I've been nothing but trouble, the past few days
I've screwed up in dozens of unacceptable, unbelievable ways
I guess I can add you to my endless list of mistakes
Sure, we'll both have our happy endings but I have to wait
I don't know if it’s too late for me to apologize
But I'm sorry for adding pressure to your life
You need to move on from things at your own pace
And I'm sorry that I had to get in your way
Maybe if you want, we could be friends until you leave
I promise I won't like you anymore now that I'm complete
Honestly I may have taken things too far and too fast
I've learned that some things aren't meant to last
But seriously, I would rather be your friend than making it hard
I'm sorry, I ruined things right from the start
There's not much I know about you
Fear will always make you blind
But the answer is in clear view
It's amazing what you'll find face to face


"You're like high on Daft Punk.."
- Denise [:
holloway


Posts: 8677
Bzoink Rockstar
Profile | Journal
Posted: 03 Nov 2009 07:29 PM       Subject: RE: Another apology..this time, someone actually has to read it.
Well, I don't know if I can comment on this or not, and if I can't, just let me know and I'll be sure to delete it.
But this is amazing, and it's easy to relate to, which makes it even better.
You write the most beautiful things, Monty<3
There is nothing left to hide.


xxakqkxx


Posts: 9380
Bzoink Rockstar
Profile | Journal
Posted: 03 Nov 2009 08:27 PM       Subject: RE: Another apology..this time, someone actually has to read it.
Pure amazing Monty.<3 :wink:
What got me into this mess, that devoured me? Lies and deceitful actions keep promising.
fallingstupidforyoux


Posts: 7056
Bzoink Rockstar
Profile | Journal
Posted: 04 Nov 2009 03:06 PM       Subject: RE: Another apology..this time, someone actually has to read it.
Mood: annoyed | Status: fallingstupidforyoux Monty isn't very happy right now. lol :p Thursday
Aw, thank you Morgan...everyone is welcome to give their feedback, always, you know that.

And Ari, thank youu!
There's not much I know about you
Fear will always make you blind
But the answer is in clear view
It's amazing what you'll find face to face


"You're like high on Daft Punk.."
- Denise [:
holloway


Posts: 8677
Bzoink Rockstar
Profile | Journal
Posted: 04 Nov 2009 04:45 PM       Subject: RE: Another apology..this time, someone actually has to read it.
Okay, well I didn't know if you meant, SOMEONE specific. So, just wanted to make sure.
And what do you mean someone actually read it?
O.o

I'm confused, but it is really good, I'm never denying that C:
There is nothing left to hide.


fallingstupidforyoux


Posts: 7056
Bzoink Rockstar
Profile | Journal
Posted: 04 Nov 2009 04:46 PM       Subject: RE: Another apology..this time, someone actually has to read it.
Mood: annoyed | Status: fallingstupidforyoux Monty isn't very happy right now. lol :p Thursday
Well, someone specific had to read it...they knew who they are.
It's open for anyone to read and give feedback on.
There's not much I know about you
Fear will always make you blind
But the answer is in clear view
It's amazing what you'll find face to face


"You're like high on Daft Punk.."
- Denise [:
 

Page: 1