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Posted: 09 Oct 2009 12:36 AM       Subject: The Girl with Black lipstick

I laugh I cry but it doesnít mean Iím alive
I scream Iíll bleed does that make me a freak
Late nights with you feels like walking
On the moon barefooted
But every time I can feel it
The whole moment fades
Trapped within today
Curled like a pretzel.



My eyes donít attempt to close
Causing my heart to unfold
And spill then pour
What more could I ask for?
Or possibly
Want?
I donít know I donít know
Who really knows when nothing is ever enough?




Iím reaching out but I canít reach
Your way out is my way in
Never means forever and forever means never
1 Mistake Down 1, 0000 more to make
Come play with me like you use to
In the garden of forbidden eternal souls
I promise I wonít let go if you donít
Even if you do thereís a part of me that will forever stay with you.

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keena
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I'm searching for my piece of light, it rains, it pours
I'll find my way but please don't leave me here again All alone.
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Posted: 10 Oct 2009 10:14 AM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
I love this. ;)
You're great Keena.
trying to search for a purpose I am Ari. ilyNancy
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Posted: 10 Oct 2009 11:27 AM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
Glad you love it,Thank You Ari : )

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keena
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Posted: 10 Oct 2009 11:29 AM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
Honestly, no problem.
You have like AMAZING talent there. ;)
trying to search for a purpose I am Ari. ilyNancy
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Posted: 10 Oct 2009 11:02 PM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
Ooh, that was pretty nifty there, Keena.

Good job ^.^
"When the sky turns gray
and everything is screaming
I will reach inside
just to find my heart is beating"
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Posted: 11 Oct 2009 12:26 AM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
Thank you guys so much! :]

i just might not have lost my writing mojo afterall wooohoo!




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keena
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Posted: 11 Oct 2009 10:41 AM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
I love it!
Youve got talent hun
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Posted: 11 Oct 2009 04:49 PM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
=D thank you bubbles!

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keena
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Posted: 11 Oct 2009 04:54 PM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
You're welcome Keena!
"When the sky turns gray
and everything is screaming
I will reach inside
just to find my heart is beating"
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Posted: 11 Oct 2009 09:31 PM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
:] i'm Eternally Grateful for all the feedback i've gotten from everyone.

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keena
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Posted: 12 Oct 2009 04:35 PM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
I love it Keena!
Its really good! :D
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Posted: 12 Oct 2009 07:52 PM         Subject: RE: The Girl with Black lipstick
Thank you Emerald :D

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keena
Gemini ❤ 12 02 09
Occupation; Dorky punkie Junkie Chick
I'm searching for my piece of light, it rains, it pours
I'll find my way but please don't leave me here again All alone.
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