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Posted: 19 Sep 2009 12:41 AM       Subject: Rize the fallen Make the Rize fall all over Again
i sorta Wrote this for monty well she inspired me...

So Iíve never been here before
But so far Iím not enjoying the view
Never in a million years could I Imagine what he has done to you
You were Once like an Opera your heart echoing Vibrantly 1000 heart
Beats but now it hardly beats at all
[Stand by]
The clouds no longer dance
The sky is very still I guess itís immuned
To how you feel
But then again who could really ever be
Feel exactly all the emotions he has cursed you with
You have so much love within your heart-shaped veins
You just cannot grasp the posession to hate him
For what heís done
they say never wish Bad on Another
But in the End
Youíll be smiling hun.
For he may have shunned you this time
But you Obtain the essence of the sunís rays
He may have clipped off your wings
But youíll grow stronger and silkyer
Ones made of eternal passion
Loveís angel Angel of love never dies

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Posted: 19 Sep 2009 12:43 AM         Subject: RE: Rize the fallen Make the Rize fall all over Again
Oh my god.
This is beautiful.
I loved it.
And I'm glad that I inspired you<3
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Posted: 19 Sep 2009 12:43 AM         Subject: RE: Rize the fallen Make the Rize fall all over Again
Oh my God.

That was really good!
"He may have clipped off your wings
But youíll grow stronger and silkyer
Ones made of eternal passion
Loveís angel Angel of love never dies."

That was awesome <33
"When the sky turns gray
and everything is screaming
I will reach inside
just to find my heart is beating"
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Posted: 19 Sep 2009 01:07 AM         Subject: RE: Rize the fallen Make the Rize fall all over Again
thank you

and yes you inspired me.

i'm really glad you liked it

it just came too me suddenly like how you felt affected me


like why good ppl are always the ones who shine so bright


but manage to always get Eclipsed

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Posted: 19 Sep 2009 01:09 AM         Subject: RE: Rize the fallen Make the Rize fall all over Again
Aww.
That's really sweet!
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Posted: 19 Sep 2009 01:11 AM         Subject: RE: Rize the fallen Make the Rize fall all over Again
thanks

i like that too i dont know how i came up with that
i really try to be as creative as i can.

i aprreciate the love

<33

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Posted: 19 Sep 2009 01:12 AM         Subject: RE: Rize the fallen Make the Rize fall all over Again
:)

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Posted: 19 Sep 2009 09:41 AM         Subject: RE: Rize the fallen Make the Rize fall all over Again
This poem is a KILLER. ;)
trying to search for a purpose I am Ari. ilyNancy
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