Topic: you know who you are.
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oovictoria


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Posted: 20 May 2009 10:01 PM       Subject: you know who you are.
this is what I really think about you. morbid? yeah. true? yeah.

I cut my finger today
I didn't say anything
Because I wanted to see if you'd notice
You didn't
I didn't say anything
Because I wanted to see if it'd hurt
It did
I didn't say anything
Because I wanted tp see if I'd bleed
I didn't
I won't say anything
Because I want to see if you notice
You don't
follow me.
-smile-


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Posted: 23 May 2009 02:17 PM         Subject: RE: you know who you are.
Wow...that's very interesting...

Smile and the world smiles with you
Keep Smiling...

Because You Never Know Who Might Be Falling In Love With Your... Smile
It might be stormy now, but it can't rain forever...
mizzshears


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Posted: 23 May 2009 04:37 PM         Subject: RE: you know who you are.
It sort of reminds me of sylvia plath - cut

it starts like this:

What a thrill ----
My thumb instead of an onion.
The top quite gone
Except for a sort of a hinge

Of skin,
A flap like a hat,
Dead white.
Then that red plush.
Nickname: Burdock





oovictoria


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Posted: 25 May 2009 08:05 PM         Subject: RE: you know who you are.
smile: haha you crack me UP! lol!! i'm not "emo" (for lack of better term), i promise!

burdock: yeah, i've heard of that i think.
follow me.
xxakqkxx


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Posted: 25 May 2009 11:02 PM         Subject: RE: you know who you are.
Im sorry to say this...
I have no idea what you people are talking about.
trying to search for a purpose
I am Ari. ilyNancy
I am worth it.
dreams are achievable
Way to my heart is owls
opoll602


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Posted: 05 Jun 2009 06:54 AM         Subject: RE: you know who you are.
Yes, this is really very sticky and very emotional poem. The word you know who you are is too much weight.
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