Topic: Take a look & let me know what you think, please. =)
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tifferz89


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Posted: 22 Apr 2009 05:53 PM       Subject: Take a look & let me know what you think, please. =)
Well, I made this one day.. it all just came to my mind. Tell me what you think & if you want me to post another one. I am not that great at like writing & stuff. I usually only make wacky stuff that I think someone made get a laugh out of. =)


Thanks!





Here's a song I made for all the Hobo's! :)



"I Like That Road Guy"


There's a man walking down the road,
He's a little stinky & really old,
I like his long hair it makes me smile,
Come on road guy in my room a while,
You can sit in my car just don't touch the seat,
I would let you but you've been in the street,
Oh come on road guy & look my way,
Don't worry sir, I know you can't pay,
I love you road guy, I love you lots,
Let's go to Sonic, I'll buy the tots,
For all the people who love road guys,
They smell like a$$, but they can put down some fries!

♥ Lets have a heart of diamonds, tough but so beautiful! ♥


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♥ Tifferz!
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Posted: 30 Apr 2009 12:21 AM         Subject: RE: Take a look & let me know what you think, please. =)
LOL!!! its weird, funny, and totally unique.
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Posted: 30 Apr 2009 02:01 PM         Subject: RE: Take a look & let me know what you think, please. =)
Thanks! =)
♥ Lets have a heart of diamonds, tough but so beautiful! ♥


www.myspace.com/sexiestonebythenameoftiff


Go check it out & add me. =)

♥ Tifferz!
euphoric-frenzy


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Posted: 30 Apr 2009 02:17 PM         Subject: RE: Take a look & let me know what you think, please. =)
Haha. This is awesome. I freakin love tots.
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Posted: 14 May 2009 05:14 AM         Subject: RE: Take a look & let me know what you think, please. =)
Haha, haven't read something like that anywhere XD Very original.. :P

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Posted: 14 May 2009 11:31 PM         Subject: RE: Take a look & let me know what you think, please. =)
Awesome song ;) and you put Sonic in the song. I think you should make more. You could be good for making up awesome songs for commericals.

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Posted: 17 May 2009 07:40 PM         Subject: RE: Take a look & let me know what you think, please. =)
Ahaha, that was funny & cute. Nice job. :D
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Posted: 17 May 2009 08:02 PM         Subject: RE: Take a look & let me know what you think, please. =)
i loved it! it had me laughing the entire time! good job
you know i can't stay long
all i wanted to say was i love you and i'm not afraid
can you hear me?
can you feel me in your arms?

holding my last breath
safe inside myself
are all my thoughts of you
sweet raptured light it ends here tonight
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