Topic: Two Years
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Posted: 05 Oct 2009 07:18 PM       Subject: Two Years
These two years mean completely nothing
but i keep praying they will mean something
i cant stand the pain anymore
if you loved me you'd let me walk out that door.
[Chorus]
The screaming, the yelling
the endless fights,
This is why we were up all night?
Cant we have just one day
where no one will win?
[End of Chorus]
I've walked away once before
but I came back for just one more
shot at this, our perfect mistake
I cant stand this heart break
[Chorus]
The screaming, the yelling
the endless fights,
This is why we were up all night?
Cant we have just one day
where no one will win?
[End of Chorus]
Why are we crying
and holding hands?
Why are you not mad?
If this is how it will always be
maybe I should leave.
[Chorus]
The screaming, the yelling
the endless fights,
This is why we were up all night?
Cant we have just one day
where noone will win?
[End of Chorus]
The screaming the yelling
the endless fights
this is why we were up all night?
cant we just have one day
where no one gets hit?


I wrote this awhile ago and was going to put it into a local contest but before I do I was some honest opinions.
7.28.09 that date turned my life into something that I never realized was true.
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Posted: 05 Oct 2009 09:22 PM         Subject: RE: Two Years
Hi!

I really liked it (:

My favorite part was "But I can back for just one more shot at this, our perfect mistake"
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