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Posted: 08 Aug 2009 10:09 AM       Subject: My very first song.
Alright, so last night I tried to write a song. I'm going to show you it & tell me what you guys think I should change in it & what the title should be.


I Found You

Life gets more enjoyable
Whenever I'm with you.

The hardest years in my life
Were the ones I wasted
Waiting for you.

Up all night.
Crying all day.
That was the story of my life.

Being alone every night
Was just the worst feeling.

No more of my heartaches.
NO more staying up all night all alone.
No more wasting my life.
Because I found you.

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Posted: 08 Aug 2009 08:56 PM         Subject: RE: My very first song.
Awwwww, I'm horrible at helping with stuff like that.
But that was adorable. xD
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Posted: 08 Aug 2009 09:40 PM         Subject: RE: My very first song.
Hey, that's fine. I just really was in the zone last night.

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Posted: 08 Aug 2009 11:06 PM         Subject: RE: My very first song.
I. loved. that.

It was so cute, but again, I'm not good at making titles, or advice giving, but it was really awesome. :]
"When the sky turns gray
and everything is screaming
I will reach inside
just to find my heart is beating"
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Posted: 08 Aug 2009 11:36 PM         Subject: RE: My very first song.
Thanks so much!

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Posted: 10 Aug 2009 03:29 PM         Subject: RE: My very first song.
It was cute Kelly =)
Idk what you should title it but it's cute =)

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Posted: 10 Aug 2009 04:03 PM         Subject: RE: My very first song.
Cuteee.

Maybe the title could be
"I Found You"

Haha, simple but sweet.
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Posted: 10 Aug 2009 11:04 PM         Subject: RE: My very first song.
I like that name.

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