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Posted: 06 Aug 2009 08:39 PM       Subject: Hold Me Tight
Everything's alright when I'm with you.
My heart is now one.
Will never again be two.
After we talk my ears still ring.
With your soft voice
And the way you sing.

After you touch me
Your fingers leave a hot trail
My darkest secret
I know you'll never tell.

Sometimes we encounter problems
But soon after we're alright.
I love you so much.
Don't ever let me go.
Hold Me Tight.
"And isn't it ironic, don't you think? A little too ironic.."

Nyna. 17. I loves you. kBai now.
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Posted: 06 Aug 2009 08:46 PM         Subject: RE: Hold Me Tight
This was beautiful!
It was so short and simple.

I love:
"After we talk, my ears still ring
With your soft voice
And the way you sing"

I loved it, Nyna!
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Posted: 06 Aug 2009 08:56 PM         Subject: RE: Hold Me Tight
Monty you make me smile! Thank you so much!
"And isn't it ironic, don't you think? A little too ironic.."

Nyna. 17. I loves you. kBai now.
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Posted: 06 Aug 2009 09:00 PM         Subject: RE: Hold Me Tight
No problem (:
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Posted: 06 Aug 2009 10:10 PM         Subject: RE: Hold Me Tight
That was awesomeness.

It was simple, but powerful. You know? :]

I, also loved it!
"When the sky turns gray
and everything is screaming
I will reach inside
just to find my heart is beating"
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Posted: 06 Aug 2009 10:16 PM         Subject: RE: Hold Me Tight
Hehe. Thank you, Morgin. =) I've never been much of a poet so when I first read over it I thought thr rhyming would make it seem childish..
"And isn't it ironic, don't you think? A little too ironic.."

Nyna. 17. I loves you. kBai now.
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Posted: 06 Aug 2009 10:36 PM         Subject: RE: Hold Me Tight
You're welcome [;

Aw, no!
It's perfect. It's short and cute, as they like to say :]
"When the sky turns gray
and everything is screaming
I will reach inside
just to find my heart is beating"
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Posted: 11 Aug 2009 07:31 AM         Subject: RE: Hold Me Tight
Awhhhh, that was really, really sweet, Nyna. <333
I loved it. :]
Would it be okay if I took your breath a w a y ?
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Posted: 11 Aug 2009 04:56 PM         Subject: RE: Hold Me Tight
Thank you Katy! <3

I love you guys.
"And isn't it ironic, don't you think? A little too ironic.."

Nyna. 17. I loves you. kBai now.
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