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Posted: 28 Jul 2009 02:25 PM       Subject: Twisted Lies
so uh...i wrote this song, just recently
and monty made me post it

so here u go..
"Twisted Lies"

Every night I wish I could stare into your eyes
But I'm stuck keeping these feelings inside
You're so in love with him and I'm just behind
Trying to help you and get inside your mind
Why, why must you do this to me?
In time, time you'll come running to me
Realizing that we're so, so meant to be

You have me crawling to get to you
To a point where I'm ashamed of falling for you
I'll sing this song forever until you become mine
Why am I the one singing the lullaby?
I'm so sick of these twisted lies
Hey, hey beautiful why don't you look into my eyes
And realize, why you never made it with another guy

Yeah, I told you that I'd always be there
And I love when the sunlight shines through your hair
But when I see you love struck by him
It sickens me and I don't want to go through this again
I'm getting sick to my stomach while you mention his name
How do you know this now? How do you get inside my skin?
I don't know how you twist these lies
But itís starting to feel the same

You have me crawling to get to you
And I'm at this point where I hate how I fell for you
I'll be singing this song forever until the day where you're mine
Soon you'll be wanting a lullaby and I'll be feeding those twisted lies
Hey, hey beautiful how do you feel when you look into my eyes?
I bet you don't feel the same when you look into that other guy's

No, I'm not done with this deadly romance
I'm caught up in this situation and I've been scared since
You have me crawling to find you
So why don't you sit me down now and tell me the truth
But the eyes still met, and the lover still loved
And the liar still lied
Then came the downfall
To one's heaven stuck
In a world where nothing is beautiful

im nick, talk to me.
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Posted: 28 Jul 2009 02:29 PM         Subject: RE: Twisted Lies
Holy crap, dude, this song is amazing. (: I know from experience that I've felt some of the feelings put into this song, so I can find meaning in it too. It's very well written, and would really make a good screamo song, hahahah.
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Posted: 28 Jul 2009 02:39 PM         Subject: RE: Twisted Lies
Oh my god.
Nick...this is amazing.
I really love it!
I feel so bad for you...whoever this song is about is a total...#%^&*

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Posted: 28 Jul 2009 02:46 PM         Subject: RE: Twisted Lies
Very well written, great job! :)
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Posted: 28 Jul 2009 03:05 PM         Subject: RE: Twisted Lies
Wow that is amazing. I love it!
I've felt that way about someone before too (kinda still do, i'm just in denial).
But anyway, your song is great.
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Posted: 07 Aug 2009 01:44 AM         Subject: RE: Twisted Lies
So yeah...this piece is mind blowing. I absolutely love this to death. I felt that way about someone once, too. Still do, actually. This kinda hits me on a personal level, which makes it so much better.

Awesome piece. Thanks for sharing ^^

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Posted: 07 Aug 2009 04:35 AM         Subject: RE: Twisted Lies
dude...your a Natural i was humming the lyrics n my head
it was like listening to this on the radio....good song. :)

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Posted: 14 Aug 2009 04:17 PM         Subject: RE: Twisted Lies
Would someone be able to help me? I want to make my song longer & I want to put different words in.

Here is my song...someone told me to name is I Found You. So, that's the title.


Life gets more enjoyable
Whenever I'm with you.

The hardest years in my life
Were the ones I wasted
Waiting for you.

Up all night.
Crying all day.
That was the story of my life.

Being alone every night
Was just the worst feeling.

No more of my heartaches.
NO more staying up all night all alone.
No more wasting my life.
Because I found you.

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