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kellyburnsred


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Posted: 19 Jan 2015 03:01 PM       Subject: WAITING
I Wish I Was A Diamond

A Rare And Precious Stone

Something Very Special

That Someone Wants To Own

But I Feel Like An Unread Book

Left Upon The Rack

Many Like To Take A Look

But Always Put Me Back
Kelly Nikole
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joybucket


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Posted: 01 Jun 2015 12:52 PM         Subject: RE: WAITING
I like it!
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Posted: 09 Jun 2015 09:15 AM         Subject: RE: WAITING
Nice quote.. :)
But it seems like you're not happy.
trying to search for a purpose I am Ari. ilyNancy
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Posted: 20 Sep 2015 12:36 PM         Subject: RE: WAITING
I enjoyed your quote too, even if it sets a bit of a solemn tone. :(
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Posted: 09 Oct 2015 08:10 AM         Subject: RE: WAITING
Good poem! I like it. As for the first two lines, though...you ARE rare and precious, even if nobody has taken interest in you yet :) Maybe you're like a rare and precious stone that has yet to be discovered. :)
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